feedback for local tv commercial

[viperfitness1]

wow this is some really good feedback.... its seems to be pretty split? that may be exactly as what i need..

 

[Sea-Dated]

As a slightly overweight 30 something, I can see it hitting home with a lot of people. Especially in Oklahoma.

 

[DollaBill]

I like it. I'm the gym biz too.

 

[viperfitness1]

As a slightly overweight 30 something, I can see it hitting home with a lot of people. Especially in Oklahoma.

I like it. I'm the gym biz too.

oklahoma is the 9th fattest state... we have improved from 4th in 2005. just doing my part.

dollabill.... dare i ask???

 

[TIKI]

I like it & I'm a gym regular.

 

[Tom A.]

All I can think about is a Family Guy episode!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6OkcucXIuVI

 

[DAREDEVIL]

I like it. I'm the gym biz too.

Your in the gym biz ???????..... i thought u clean floors !!!!!!!!

OH.... gotchya :rofl:

 

[viperfitness1]

all i can think about is a family guy episode!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6okcucxiuvi

lmao!!

 

[DollaBill]

oklahoma is the 9th fattest state... we have improved from 4th in 2005. just doing my part.

dollabill.... dare i ask???

Powerhouse NJ.

 

[DollaBill]

Your in the gym biz ???????..... i thought u clean floors !!!!!!!!

OH.... gotchya :rofl:

funny:boxing_smiley::03:

 

[Chris]

The commercial is a home run.

 

[MarylandMark]

the actual execution of it and the cinematography need some work.

I like the shock factor but needs to be more flowing- jumpy filming vs fluid motion.

 

[imco offshore]

Your in the gym biz ???????..... i thought u clean floors !!!!!!!!

OH.... gotchya :rofl:

maybe he cleans the floors in the gym

 

[Perlmudder]

I like the shock factor but needs to be more flowing- jumpy filming vs fluid motion.

I know what you mean. I just sort of felt like I could film that with my digital camera and some video editing software. It didn't have the "feel" of a professional commercial.

 

[DollaBill]

maybe he cleans the floors in the gym

douchebags:sifone::boxing_smiley:

:biggrinjester::rofl:

 

[Sea-Dated]

douchebags:sifone::boxing_smiley:

:biggrinjester::rofl:

:rofl:

 

[MacGyver]

Maybe incorporate this pic in the commercial uke:

 

[Perlmudder]

Maybe incorporate this pic in the commercial uke:

hawt! :ack2: