feedback for local tv commercial

[viperfitness1]

 

[Wrinkleface]

 

[Buoy]

If this is a commercial for your business, I hope you are open to honest opinions.

I wouldn't give you my money for a membership.

Leave it on youtube. That is where it belongs.

 

[viperfitness1]

If this is a commercial for your business, I hope you are open to honest opinions.

I wouldn't give you my money for a membership.

Leave it on youtube. That is where it belongs.

did it offend you?

 

[Buoy]

didn't offend me at all.
I'm a almost 40 yr old guy that is 5'11", 165.

The commercial just seems like very juvenile humor.
You obviously take your business more serious than that in everything that I know you have done to build it. Don't belittle yourself.
Think of the customers you are trying to draw, and who would identify with that clip.
I'm thinking it isn't the same market.
Honestly, just trying to help here.

 

[MacGyver]

I thought it was funny :leaving:

 

[viperfitness1]

im not sold on using it yet... i have three being produced that will run on a rotation on local news channels. info commercial, MMA commercial, and a funny commercial (this one). to be honest i like it. cant see what is so bad that you wouldnt get a membership?? sounds like you wouldnt get one anyway...

 

[RPM]

It's kinda funny and gross at the same time!

 

[clayinaustin]

I could have gone all day without seeing that.

Sex sells, not fat.

Show a sexy women working out, and I will be more inclined to show up at your gym.

Just my two-cents...

 

[Perlmudder]

I think the idea has potential, because it is sort of humorous, but the actual execution of it and the cinematography need some work.

 

[viperfitness1]

I could have gone all day without seeing that.

Sex sells, not fat.

Show a sexy women working out, and I will be more inclined to show up at your gym.

Just my two-cents...

well we have plenty of sexy woman in the clubs... if you are looking for hot single girls and you dont have a gym membership you are probably looking in the wrong places.

i think this reaches out to the over 30 crowd of young families who maybe have had a baby and understand that its time to lose the weight they might have gained during the pregnancy. or just a wake-up call to overweight people in general to get to the gym. humor is very motivating and a little shock doesn't hurt.

 

[viperfitness1]

I think the idea has potential, because it is sort of humorous, but the actual execution of it and the cinematography need some work.

i agree!

 

[DAREDEVIL]

This is freak'n funny !!!!!!!

I think u gained weight Andy ?! :rofl:

 

[viperfitness1]

This is freak'n funny !!!!!!!

I think u gained weight Andy ?! :rofl:

lol! ya just a little...

 

[boatme]

I think it is funny and will get people talking Good or bad press is all good

Might get you some national attention

To me it is clean silly humor We need a bit more of that these days

 

[MikeyFIN]

overhere that would be too lame even...
overthere... a catch-22.

 

[Indy]

Funny...effective...kinda gross...should create a buzz good and bad which is what you want. Gym commercials are all the same...people in shape lifting or on a stairmaster, nobody even pays attention to them anymore. They probably scare more people away then draw them to it that's why you're starting to see the "judgement free zones" or whatever they're labeling them these days. Create a stir.

 

[rschap1]

Funny, reminds me of the Family Guy episode where Peter "confuses" Stewie in a similar fashion. YUCK!

 

[imco offshore]

i think your pushing the baby/sex,porno thing to close! show the fat bast/rd falling down and having a heart attack and dieing.

 

[Blue Oval]

Show the fat guy jogging, when he stops have him take his shirt off and show him wearing a bra, same message, leave the baby out of it, that baby might grow up and beat the *hit out of you for doing that. It did not offend me, I was thinking in the Baby's shoes.